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Her

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Can't you see that she's broken
just look into her eyes
promises were spoken
but then came to their demise
Where were we when she needed us
what had to come first
when all she needed was our love
we now see her hurt
She needed a few moments
we told her go and play
but all she wanted was us
to play with her everyday
When all it takes to love someone
is a kind and gentle word
So that they can feel free
to fly up like a bird
When understanding's what she needed
pushed aside is what she got
but we can change her future
to give what she has not

I cannot change the past
but my love for you does last
everything love will surpass
so do not feel downcast
Please let my love heal you
let it stir inside your soul
for everyday with out you
is another I'm not whole
I know you know I love you
I did before you were born
I wish no one had hurt you
I wish you never had felt torn
If I could steal your pain
and turn it into rain
that could wash away the stain
so the hurt would not remain
I would give the world to you
do anything you asked me to
I see what you are going through
wish I could steal those feeling blue
About well, a discussion and then another discussion both related
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NotenSMSK's avatar
A wonderful work Auntie! I really love the meter and expressions at instances and while I believe that a tweak or two somewhere will truly make it a beautiful piece, it is not any less at the moment in my eyes! It was a wonderful read with touching expressions. Perhaps only you can write that way :)