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Can't you see that she's broken
just look into her eyes
promises were spoken
but then came to their demise
Where were we when she needed us
what had to come first
when all she needed was our love
we now see her hurt
She needed a few moments
we told her go and play
but all she wanted was us
to play with her everyday
When all it takes to love someone
is a kind and gentle word
So that they can feel free
to fly up like a bird
When understanding's what she needed
pushed aside is what she got
but we can change her future
to give what she has not
I cannot change the past
but my love for you does last
everything love will surpass
so do not feel downcast
Please let my love heal you
let it stir inside your soul
for everyday with out you
is another I'm not whole
I know you know I love you
I did before you were born
I wish no one had hurt you
I wish you never had felt torn
If I could steal your pain
and turn it into rain
that could wash away the stain
so the hurt would not remain
I would give the world to you
do anything you asked me to
I see what you are going through
wish I could steal those feeling blue
just look into her eyes
promises were spoken
but then came to their demise
Where were we when she needed us
what had to come first
when all she needed was our love
we now see her hurt
She needed a few moments
we told her go and play
but all she wanted was us
to play with her everyday
When all it takes to love someone
is a kind and gentle word
So that they can feel free
to fly up like a bird
When understanding's what she needed
pushed aside is what she got
but we can change her future
to give what she has not
I cannot change the past
but my love for you does last
everything love will surpass
so do not feel downcast
Please let my love heal you
let it stir inside your soul
for everyday with out you
is another I'm not whole
I know you know I love you
I did before you were born
I wish no one had hurt you
I wish you never had felt torn
If I could steal your pain
and turn it into rain
that could wash away the stain
so the hurt would not remain
I would give the world to you
do anything you asked me to
I see what you are going through
wish I could steal those feeling blue
Literature
Darkness
The pitter-patter of raindrops on cobblestones
when walking alone, engrossed in your memories,
your thoughts condescend behind you like a
narcissistic parent.
Vision changes, perspectives are skewed
downwards. A skeptical outlook becomes
a recording in your mind; when does it stop?
How do I get to this moment? Where did
I fucked up?
A flash of gunpowder, the mind lights up like
for the one instant where you felt hope. You
had an answer, but the voices keep coming;
smothering, snuffing; the fire is gone
and I'm suffering in silence.
Literature
Dark Thought Pt. 2
All I had was given to you
My blood, sweat and tears
I gave you shelter from the floods
And I watched you throw away all
My faith, love and trust
Even though you promised me,
Knew I didn't let just anybody in
To gaze upon
My heart, hopes and insecurities
All on the line for you
But when I look back
You had everything to gain
And you did
While I lost everything
When I never had enough for myself
Literature
Prepared
I cried until my eyes dried out and the world became black.
I bled until my heart stopped beating and my skin went cold.
I loathed until my soul collapsed and my mind grew dark.
This was when my demons handed me a mask of the face I used to wear and whispered
Go on. Life can't hurt you anymore.
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A wonderful work Auntie! I really love the meter and expressions at instances and while I believe that a tweak or two somewhere will truly make it a beautiful piece, it is not any less at the moment in my eyes! It was a wonderful read with touching expressions. Perhaps only you can write that way