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There is a place where no one knows,
Where fireflies live and nature wildly grows,
It is magnificent,
beyond these trees,
I'd take you there,
But I can't you see,
This is a place that can only exist,
If it is left alone to grow in bliss,
I yearn to show and long to share,
But I cannot bring myself to take you there,
The musings of such a splendorous display,
will urge you to amuse others this way,
The wild of this brilliance may come to extinction,
So this Midnight Stroll I must keep within.
inspired by Midnight Stroll by Modernerd [link]
I loved his art so much I asked if I could use it as an inspiration, this is where it lead me...
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is very well written. And I mean... I loved it! The start is good, the shorter sentences had me a LIL wondering where you were going but when you reached:

..."this is a place that can only exist..."

I was like... this is wonderful.

The theme is beautiful and the way you presented it makes it even more beautiful! both the artists work and poets work match!
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Modernerd Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
This is soooo nice! Definitely leaves a story now when I look back at the painting. Great job!
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You really inspired a beautiful piece :D
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Cinders8328 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I agree, I have added another poem called On my Midnight stroll, I do not like it as much, but I didn't feel right not sharing what other thoughts were inspired as well! Here's the link: [link] :idea:
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Modernerd Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
:)
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