literature

Please, I'm Sorry

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Literature Text

I pulled away,
I pushed today,
Please understand,
This was not planned,
Look into my eyes,
Please realize,
The pain's too much to bear,
If you choose not to care,
I did not mean to,
Make you go through,
All of this,
Just for us to split,
Can't you see?
Just listen to me,
Or we will never have,
what was meant to really last.
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You actually handled this one quite well :) I am glad you added it to groups and see? you are getting better response! I really like the rhyming and straightforwardness of this piece :) on the other hand it managed to convey many emotions as well :nod: So overall, a really nice work :)