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Midnight Stroll

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There is a place where no one knows,
Where fireflies live and nature wildly grows,
It is magnificent,
beyond these trees,
I'd take you there,
But I can't you see,
This is a place that can only exist,
If it is left alone to grow in bliss,
I yearn to show and long to share,
But I cannot bring myself to take you there,
The musings of such a splendorous display,
will urge you to amuse others this way,
The wild of this brilliance may come to extinction,
So this Midnight Stroll I must keep within.
inspired by Midnight Stroll by Modernerd [link]
I loved his art so much I asked if I could use it as an inspiration, this is where it lead me...
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NotenSMSK's avatar
This is very well written. And I mean... I loved it! The start is good, the shorter sentences had me a LIL wondering where you were going but when you reached:

..."this is a place that can only exist..."

I was like... this is wonderful.

The theme is beautiful and the way you presented it makes it even more beautiful! both the artists work and poets work match!